Globalization Essay Reflection

Hello everyone!

Last week Mr. Walker gave us our common assessment in which we needed to write a persuasive essay on whether or not globalization is positive or negative. The exact prompt is as below:

Prompt: Analyze the impact of globalization in the time period of 1950 to present. Has globalization been largely a positive or a negative in the development of our world?

I chose to go negative on this prompt. Globalization as changed out world so much these last few years that it almost seems unbelievable. However, despite the many advantages globalization has brought us, the negative effects have backfired on the human race. Our unique cultures are slowly being eaten away by dominating ones.

As the title of this post states, I will be doing a reflection on my essay I wrote on Tuesday. Personally, I believe I could've done better. I had a miscalculation in my time distribution, and the last 2 body paragraphs were pretty rushed. I think I could've improved on the analysis as well as the topic sentences. If we end up writing another essay, I will remember to plan ahead, so I won't be so short of time/

That's it for today's post! Comment below and tell me what your view of the prompt is!